I hope you like my writing about the royal wedding 2018
Royal wedding 2018
In England prince Harry and Meghan got married.
It was a royal Wedding and many people all over
the world watched them.
It was a royal Wedding and many people all over
the world watched them.
Meghan was wearing a wedding gown.
She had a pattern on her veil. She had a tiara that’s
so pretty and it’s so cute on her. She is so pretty if it’
s on her. She had cute flowers. She had a sparkly
shiny gown. Her gown is so pretty on her. She had
a sparkly shiny tiara. She had sparkly wearing rings
on her. She had a good time because I see from the
photo she was smiling and that made me happy for
her and there was some flower girls and they were
cute and there was cool boys that was cute. It was
fun to write about it.
She had a pattern on her veil. She had a tiara that’s
so pretty and it’s so cute on her. She is so pretty if it’
s on her. She had cute flowers. She had a sparkly
shiny gown. Her gown is so pretty on her. She had
a sparkly shiny tiara. She had sparkly wearing rings
on her. She had a good time because I see from the
photo she was smiling and that made me happy for
her and there was some flower girls and they were
cute and there was cool boys that was cute. It was
fun to write about it.
Hi Regina it is me this some good work from the royal wedding.
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ReplyDeleteHi my name is Edyn I am from May Road School and I am in room 13.I love your story about the royal wedding. I like how you know much about the royal wedding. Now I know more about the royal wedding and Thank you for sharing your learning about the royal wedding.I love the story you have wrote and posted in your blog I also remember how I wrote about the royal wedding Thank you for sharing what you have learnt great job and keep up the good work.Next time can you make it interesting for the reader and make the reader want to read it and can you use surface features and deeper features.Why did you write the story of meghan and harry, and did you enjoy writing about it and why did you like writing about Meghan and harry.Thank you for sharing your learning with us great job.
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